Mind Puzzles

Mind Puzzles

A Poem by Niall H
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My mind.

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The cool winter air whispers into my ear,

A sign of trauma ahead

This causes a harsh jolt down my spine,

Which would shake the heavens

Why do I have this built up paranoia?
It sits in my mind,

Like a jailbird in his cell

Plotting away,

As I try to move on

It sucks me back in and clutches,

Will it ever let go?
The probable answer is no.

© 2008 Niall H


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Niall H
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EMP
i really like this, it's so poweful. i really love your poems :) keep writing :) x

Posted 15 Years Ago
paranoia is such a painful thing.
It can tear you apart.
Your poems are so raw and elegant and deep and beautiful and just frankly....perfect.
This is what poetry should be.....

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Niall H

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