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The feeling of being in the world with just the one person who you hold dear.

I sit and dream my time away,

Dreaming of a place to stay;

Come to the place and follow me,

We'll be in love and feel so free;

We'll sit, sing, laugh and cry,

And gaze into the midnight's sky;

I'll whisper softly, one sweet line,

And you will love me for all of time.

 

You must be made of glue,

Cause I'm sticking with you, through and through;

As once said, my heart leaps up,

Due to this unbreakable love;

My final message to you is this;

This'll feel like one ever lasting kiss.

Author's Note

Simply enjoy.

Reviews

[EMP]

this is really nice (: so romantic and clever

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

Every now and again I like to read a basic yet artistic poem....
Thanks for writing it!

[T.J. Timmins]

Very nice, very full of emotion, obviously. It flows nicely almost fully through, the only part that made me stumble was
"As once said, my heart leaps up,
Due to this unbreakable love;"
As nice as those lines are on their own, they seem to stick out from the rhyme scheme everywhere else in the poem. It would flow much more fully if that was cleaned up a bit, but otherwise a very nice piece of work you've got here.

[Lady Lazarus.]

this is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful.
the pace and style of it is perfect and its so touching and beautiful.
ian would be proud