Chapter 1 : [Confusion]

Chapter 1 : [Confusion]

A Story by SirEnvious
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You arrived at a place that you are not so familiar with.

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Waking up,it’s quite dark around here,and this doesn’t feels like your bed at all.

“Where am I?” ,You called out . There’s no reply,in fact,the whole room is empty.

You got up from the bed,looking around,this is not your room .

This is a child room,there is toys all around floor. You made sure to look carefully so you wouldn’t fell down,and made it to the make-up table beside the only door in the room,there’s a torchlight . Hesitating,you took the torchlight and went for the door.


You slowly walked out from the room,in front of you is a long corridor that leads to the right.

Walking forward seems to be the only way out,so you did.

Along the corridor,there’s a small table,with pictures of family you didn’t recognize and a small radio beside it.

The radio seem to be broadcasting a news of a family murdered in 1955. The family was found dead in the living room of the house,with the father holding a gun,her wife clutching their son and daughter,probably trying to stop the father. The scene isn’t that child-friendly overall.They also found the baby of the parents in the bathroom down stair, drowned in the bathtub.


You didn’t give it any second though,and kept on moving forward until you turned the corner to the right.

The way leads to the entryway of the house,in front of the front door is another door which you don’t know where it leads to.There is another way that leads to another long corridor though.

You tried your luck on the front door,locked. As you sigh,you heard a sound above you,you looked up immediately,but there’s nothing.At least now you know that it’s a two-story house.


You hesitated,but still walk along the long corridor,as there is no other way around.

You kept on walking until you reached the end of the corridor,which is a metal door. “There seems to be an awful lot of door around in this house,huh?” ,You thought.

You opened the door and walked through it. A sudden darkness looms across my eyes,and you arrived at the kids room again.

© 2017 SirEnvious


Author's Note

SirEnvious
Short stuff,will do it one chapter at a time.

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There's a couple spots where you mess up past/present tense. also, the last line you switch from "You" to "I". Nice work though

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Pen_or_sword

7 Years Ago

ill review one, which one do you want me to read
SirEnvious

7 Years Ago

Sup,buddy,she wants you to read all of them. Think you up for the task? xD
Sabby

7 Years Ago

lolololololol 10/10 m8

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