Too much!!

Too much!!

A Poem by NhanHoang
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Help others, but also help you. Because if you are unhealthy you are unable to help others, so Help others and yourself by First helping yourself.

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                  Funny huh?
      It is like they matter more
              More than you
                 More than I
           Without hesitating 
        Without thinking about it
            Forgetting how we feel
              How we are doing
             We offer our hands
                 Tries to help
              And in the process
                 Hurt ourselves
Thinking that we are benefiting from it
                Growing from it
              Not seeing the pain
                 We continue.
                 Until one day
             We see the impact
               I laugh it off 
              Move on with life
                Because I know 
    That I will do the same thing again
                   As for you
                 You walk away
          As that is all that I can say
     Because we are two different people
     Wanting to help people in Any ways
                  Funny huh?




© 2021 NhanHoang


Author's Note

NhanHoang
Real thing between me and my friend and she just motivated me to write this poem and yeah, it seems like this is a real thing between us lol

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I love how you express this point in a straightforward no-nonsense way that's easy to understand and it's convincing (((HUGS)))

Posted 3 Years Ago


You are so correct. One must too too and be aware of their own health bother physically and mentally. Being selfless can also lead one to care more for others then for themselves. To have a balance in life is a healthy thing. Thank you for sharing your wise poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


NhanHoang

3 Years Ago

and thank you for your comment, and yeah, balance is key to successful and healthy life

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NhanHoang
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