Bestfriends!
A Poem by NhanHoang
Friends? friends, friends, friends. What is it good for? Absolutely Everything.
You're the reason I get up
Up and out of bed
You're the reason I look forward to school
Everyday I discover something
Everyday something new happens
Something that is now gone
Deep within my subconscious
Yet
The feelings of each stupid thing you do
Is here with me
I can feel it
It makes me smile
And the memories I made with you is here
Only partly
You guys are stupid
Idiots, Funny and kind
And that is what makes you
My bestfriends
© 2021 NhanHoang
Author's Note
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Friends are what makes you successful, they are what brings you up when you are down, make you laugh when you're depressed, and your mental health is more important than grades because what is success and all A's if you are going through a mental break downs and depression?
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Reviews
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I'm not a fan of calling people "stupid" or "idiot" -- even tho I know this is part of the playful friendship pact that you are showing us. Maybe if there were more descriptive words that helped us feel the ways you admire your friends, then these kidding put-downs wouldn't seem so harsh (((HUGS)))
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
woahhhhh, so the point is adding more words for the reader, your friends understand but the readers .. read morewoahhhhh, so the point is adding more words for the reader, your friends understand but the readers don't and so be more descriptive, thanks a lott
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Added on September 17, 2021
Last Updated on September 17, 2021
Author
NhanHoang
About
I am a poet, a singer, a songwriter, and I also have faith in God, I haven't posted any songs out yet but I will do it soon. more..
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