Bestfriends!

Bestfriends!

A Poem by NhanHoang
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Friends? friends, friends, friends. What is it good for? Absolutely Everything.

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        You're the reason I get up
              Up and out of bed 
You're the reason I look forward to school
       Everyday I discover something 
     Everyday something new happens
      Something that is now gone
     Deep within my subconscious 
                      Yet
The feelings of each stupid thing you do 
                 Is here with me
                  I can feel it
             It makes me smile
And the memories I made with you is here
                 Only partly 
            You guys are stupid 
          Idiots, Funny and kind
           And that is what makes you
               My bestfriends 

© 2021 NhanHoang


Author's Note

NhanHoang
Friends are what makes you successful, they are what brings you up when you are down, make you laugh when you're depressed, and your mental health is more important than grades because what is success and all A's if you are going through a mental break downs and depression?

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I'm not a fan of calling people "stupid" or "idiot" -- even tho I know this is part of the playful friendship pact that you are showing us. Maybe if there were more descriptive words that helped us feel the ways you admire your friends, then these kidding put-downs wouldn't seem so harsh (((HUGS)))

Posted 3 Years Ago


NhanHoang

3 Years Ago

woahhhhh, so the point is adding more words for the reader, your friends understand but the readers .. read more

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