Limpid Uncertainty

She realised she was an intruder here,
Yet she chose intransigence.
She's tired now, she might quit....

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the use of words. You said a mouthful with so few. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Neytri]

Thank you so much for reviewing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Jonathan Lee]

Curiously vague.
Reminiscent of haiku.
Short, but decent work.

[Neytri]

Thank you so much for reviewing :)

[Kaliope]

Ah yes, swimming against the tide can be tiresome and makes one often wonder whether it's even worth the effort. Knowing when to give up and when to hang on is probably one of the most difficult decisions we face in life. Whatever the outcome, all the emotions involved are beautifully conveyed here in a minimum of words - great job & thanks for sharing!

[Neytri]

Thank you so much for reviewing :)

[Blackheart]

Simple yet meaningful words. Looking forward to more creations like this. :)

[Neytri]

Thank you so much :)

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely profound write Neytri. So well said. I do hope you don't mean writerscafe!

[Neytri]

No no , definitely not...lol. Thanks for reviewing :)

[Gaurav]

Beautiful piece of surrender. Yet showing strong virtues in your heart.

[Neytri]

Thank you so much....