Limpid Uncertainty

Limpid Uncertainty

A Poem by Neytri

She realised she was an intruder here,
Yet she chose intransigence.
She's tired now, she might quit....

© 2016 Neytri


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Amazing...moved...really short of words

Keep writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neytri

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it :)
Hang in there,it will work out !

Come on India, your much better than those Aussies !! ( T20 cricket World Cup ) !!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Neytri

8 Years Ago

Umm.. Thanks for reviewing. But I strongly believe in equality though. :)
Tom

8 Years Ago

Yes, me too....& congrats to India, now into the semi-final of t20 World Cup !! 😄
Neytri

8 Years Ago

Yeah.. Hope we'll get through :)
I don't know if I am right or not.. but i felt the sorrow and hopelessness and I know how it hurts... it was short but still good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Neytri

8 Years Ago

Thank you
Short and sweet. A beautifully telling piece, plain and simple. Thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Neytri

8 Years Ago

You're welcome and thank you for reviewing..
WoW!!!
taking a decision or choosing a direction is still easy..........going on.....is the real question...... often times THE real question.........
great write......
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Neytri

8 Years Ago

I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you :)
Lovely wording here...maintaining stamina is often tiring, when is enough enough...enjoyed this piece :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Neytri

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much. :)
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dan
Feeling as if one does not belong may persuade one the quest to conform but choosing intransigence and refusing to change does indeed give one a sense of pride. Maintaining this outlook can be a bit tiring, but one should never quit the quest to stand out and embrace self. Very nice piece, Neytri. take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


Neytri

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing :)
A beautiful piece, said in just few lines... Hope to see more works like this from you... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Neytri

8 Years Ago

Pleasure is mine :)
No matter the journey we walk just remember who you are. These are your steps and no one elses

Posted 8 Years Ago


Neytri

8 Years Ago

Yes, they are our steps indeed... It might seem very difficult to hold on to being ourselves, but it.. read more
Everyone who has chosen to remain herself/himself has felt this way one time or another.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Neytri

8 Years Ago

Yeah, right! But the ones who can hold on to who they are, they are the real winners :) Thanks for r.. read more
Avinash

8 Years Ago

Bingo... :)

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Added on February 6, 2016
Last Updated on February 6, 2016
Tags: Weakness, Helplessness, Despair

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Neytri
Neytri

Guwahati, New Guwahati, India



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