Real Heartache

Real Heartache

A Poem by Daniel Whitaker
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This is how I feel... All of this agony caused by one girl.

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Time is running fast,
I can't keep up.
Just look at the mess I made,
I can't fix it.
I feel lost and broken,
But why?

I thought it was love,
But I was wrong.
You used me,
Then tore me down.
I am done,
My life spent.

I was chasing after you,
But now I'm running away.
I'd rather go back to my past,
Then to be broken by you.
Can't you see that I'm hurt?
Just leave me,
Don't test me.
You don't know who I am like,
I am my stepfather.

You changed me,
You told me that it wasn't true.
That I wasn't anything like him,
I guess you lied.

You moved on,
You are glad that I'm gone.
You knew how terrible I was,
You couldn't get away fast enough.

I wanted to hide the passionate side of me,
You brought it out.
The walls I built around my heart,
You destroyed them.
You made your way into my heart,
But you broke it.
Causing all this pain.

You don't know what it's like,
What it's like to fall in love,
or even be heartbroken.
Now I know why you were always cold.
You showed me your dark side,
Let me show you mine....

© 2015 Daniel Whitaker


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Sounds like someone broke your heart...
I'm sorry, I hope everything gets better for you.
Heartbreak is hard, but is good inspiration.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice work here, sad and unfortunately the way several relationships go but nonetheless
a painful learning experience. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Whitaker

9 Years Ago

Thanks Jamestown, but a heart break is always good inspiration though.
Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I really like the way you think! PTL...
Daniel Whitaker

9 Years Ago

Thank you man

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Added on February 25, 2015
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