No Longer Needed

No Longer Needed

A Poem by Daniel Whitaker

Running everywhere,
I am free from care.
I am no longer needed,
So you toss me aside.
You find someone new,
You tell them that you love them.
I am in the background,
Leaving you alone.
I am moving on,
You moved on.
Goodbye,
You don't even know I'm here.

© 2015 Daniel Whitaker


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A beautiful Poem dan I know what it's like yesterday one of my friends threw me away we were friends for 11 years and she just said some cruel words and bye bye friend but it's ok kid because you know what there are two types of people the fake people and the people that will care about you to the very end thank you for sharing kid was a pleasure to read Broken girl

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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we are always loved by someone NewBoy - its not always the one we chase after to be loved or liked by but love is love - real friends stick around and dont bolt on you. Your poems are tinged with a sadness - devoid of hope but then there is the one or two lines that scream "I am a survivor" - here it is "I am moving on" - thats positive, not despairing at all. Good write DW

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Daniel Whitaker

9 Years Ago

Thank you ANTO
A beautiful Poem dan I know what it's like yesterday one of my friends threw me away we were friends for 11 years and she just said some cruel words and bye bye friend but it's ok kid because you know what there are two types of people the fake people and the people that will care about you to the very end thank you for sharing kid was a pleasure to read Broken girl

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Here I am once again. I was with you, But now gone. Hidden from sight, Always there. Just no one cares to notice. more..

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