Contain The Jealousy

Contain The Jealousy

A Poem by Daniel Whitaker

I have to fight it,
This jealousy...
I can't stand seeing another guy touch you,
Trying to flirt with you.
I want to walk over,
Wrap my arm around you. 
Then punch him,
Prove that you're mine. 
But I stay back,
You hate this jealousy.
I hate myself,
I guess I'm a terrible boyfriend.

© 2015 Daniel Whitaker


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i believe the compostion of your poem was great. but, in words i can explain a demon can not possess a persons body or mind with the use of feeling.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Daniel Whitaker

9 Years Ago

You didn't even read it lol. I was right next to you, you just wanted to comment on the poem
Dylan Andrews

9 Years Ago

though you say you are a terrible guy does not mean your jealousy is the that wants to yake over.
Daniel Whitaker

9 Years Ago

Your right lol
I like the structure of your composition... and the message. That jealousy is a feeling when demons try to posses persons minds.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on February 19, 2015
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Daniel Whitaker

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Here I am once again. I was with you, But now gone. Hidden from sight, Always there. Just no one cares to notice. more..

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