My Heart

I can feel it in my veins,

Showing the true side of me. 

All this hatred and anger burning inside,

Burning inside of me.

The demon inside,

Full of deceit.

Whispering dark things,

Evil things. 

They burn my ears,

They eat away at my heart.

Making my emotions boil,

BANG!!

All gone... 

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was very short but deep, and full of raw and powerful emotion.
Its great that you have started writing. And at an early age only gives you more and more years to get better and better.
Being a writer is amazing.
I liked this piece, keep writing :)

[Jamestown]

Very raw emotions coming out, well written piece, I'm sorry your struggling with
negative energy, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!