My Worst Fear.

I see my kids,

I hear laughter.

The laughter stops,

A gun shot goes off.

The birds scatter,

I run to the kids.

I see a van driving off,

I hear my daughter's voice. 

Screaming,

"Daddy save me, Daddy help Ashton."

I try to run to her,

The man drives off with my daughter.

I run after it, 

I'm not as fit as I used to be. 

I ran back to the house,

Crying I grab the phone. 

At that second I hear a cough,

no wait, two coughs.

I find my son,

Laying on the ground.

A hole in his chest,

I grab him.

"Dad?" cough*

I now hold a lifeless body.

I lost both of my children.,

I cry and cry. 

My alarm goes off. Just another nightmare.

Author's Note

I'm not like most kids my age. I want to have kids, I fear for their safety even though they aren't alive. Don't judge please.

Reviews

[child of God]

Wonderful story very vivid the words jump off well my phone technical anyways wonderful almost like it really happened good job Dan keep up the good work :-)
Broken girl

[Daniel Whitaker]

Thanks Broken girl. To me it just seems like normal writing.

[child of God]

It is wonderful:)

[Daniel Whitaker]

How is it wonderful?

[child of God]

Just is kid just is

[Daniel Whitaker]

I just had my folks read it. They just laughed at me.

[child of God]

I know what it is like my dad always said that I am stupid and should stop writing he would always take my journal and throw it in a fire that is why I started to post my work on this site