My Morning

It's burning away inside,

Trying to escape.

All of my secrets,

All of my secrets.

I get up every morning,

The world seems boring. 

I walk to the mirror,

   I start screaming.

Looking at this face,

Looking at this face. 

In this dreary world,

All I see is pain.

So many regrets,

So many regrets. 

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Really sad, deep and emotional piece.
But heartfelt and REAL!
I liked how you repeated the lines, made this piece more poetic.
Great work :)

[Olivia]

Really truthful and powerful poem. respect, sir

[child of God]

a wonderful song yes the world is a boring keep it up kid
broken girl

[Jamestown]

Life can be hard, but the struggle is a character builder. God is good!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!