Listen Loud Just One More Time

Listen Loud Just One More Time

 

He so wanted to tell her all over again,

   just how much he loved her ..

Not only that, but he wanted to chant it

out loud, so the whole world

   

   could hear him and in universal tongues ..

Indeed, all those words he once

dare only release, in near silent whispers

and left in the perfect shells

of both her pretty ears, he so needed to shout

out just once more, but this time to

    

   argue and to resonate like unanimous war drums ..

 

Reviews

[Dylan Macadham]

Ah, yes, how love will turn!
If only we could stay forever in the blind(ing) 'getting to know you' phase ;(

[Neville]

Now that would be a fine thing wouldn't it .. Cheers Dylan .. Neville

[Dylan Macadham]

yeah, if only :)

[Beren Ongur]

Emotionally available man who doesn’t afraid to show his love… I loved this poem so much. Beautiful work, and powerful as always

[Neville]

You are way too kind as always Miss. Beren .. thank you most kindly & true .. Neville