Once I Felt Like a Sky Hungry Kite

Once I Felt Like a Sky Hungry Kite

 

I still don’t know how

   I feel today ..

But I do know, I once

felt like a magnificent,

   sky hungry kite ..

 

That is, until you chose

to eclipse me

and then your shadow

blocked out,

   

every ounce of my light ..

 

Now I stumble around in

the darkness

feeling my way forward

a bit at a time

   

searching for morsels to eat ..

 

But I doubt very much like

the phoenix,

either resurrection, rebirth

or revival will

   

remain on the menu all week ..

 

Reviews

[Lorry]

I remember feeling like I soared once, but now I only fly in the same way a daddy longlegs flies, by jumping up and down and bouncing about a bit, shouting "almost got it" as gravity beats me once again.
Sometimes those dark corners are best, and some of them has good eatings in them too! 😃

[Neville]

just you mind your back and them knees of yours Loz otherwise you will be sore mate .. n no kiddin 🐝🐄🪲🐞😎💛👍xx

[Poetic Beauty]

The poor kite being shadowed and made to feel less than what it is. This makes me feel sad and a sense of loss of being a priority or valued. Great comparison

[Neville]

Cheer up, it's Friday .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

Indeed it is Friday. I have two days of work to go but I have a four day weekend last weekend. I celebrated my bday on Saturday

[Poetic Beauty]

Which was actually on monday

[Neville]

belated birthday best wishes ..

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you.