Playing With Words

Playing With Words

She said,

do you see what

I mean ..

He said no but,

I hear what

you say, and tho’

I’m aware,

that you search

for yourself

each day in my

poetry ..

Somehow, you

still tend

to get lost in my

ludicrous

words en-route ..

But that’s

fine by me babe

I regard it

as a journey and

quite like

the course you

take anyway ..

Oh’ plus the fact

you feel able

to pause to linger

and play,

with each of my

metaphors ..

But then my love,

I love how

you smile look

away and pretend

it’s all just

some silly old game ..

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

Your poem has set my heart aflutter, But alas, I’m at work, and the flirtatious lines, they’ve caught me off guard, Now my coworker's smile is awkward and hard. 🤣🤣🤣

My grin betrayed me, I didn’t even know, Until I saw puzzled looks in tow. So thanks for the playful, poetic delight, But next time, I'll need to read this type of poems--my face hidden!

[Neville]

Oops, sorry .. what if I either nod or give you a wink first next time .. Cheers Neville read more
Oops, sorry .. what if I either nod or give you a wink first next time .. Cheers Neville

[John the Baptist]

Unless he's deceiving himself, I believe he's got her number. On the other hand, maybe he's just flattering himself.

[Neville]

thank you for stopping by John .. Neville

[Dylan Macadham]

This one's a Keeper, and I don't just mean your fun-to-read Poem!
Though Horizontal, I hope your Muse Verticalates you at times😅

[Neville]

A true gentleman never tells .. 😉👍

[Dylan Macadham]

... yet he spins it in clever verse😎

[Neville]

You got me there.. I submit 👍

[Dylan Macadham]

.........😅

[redd Brick Keshner]

Games with words do require a good set of oars when back paddling becomes an inevitable manoeuvre! Game’s afoot until it runs aground. 🙏🏻🕊

[Neville]

I reckon you are probably write mate cheers.. Neville

[redd Brick Keshner]

Haha, only had to do that a couple of times in the past 🫠🙃🙏🏻🕊