Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times)

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Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times)

Since this thirst

could not

be quenched,

by all the sweat

you have

ever yet shed

and regardless,

of whether

upon your long

toiling,

lovemaking or

on so very many

battlefields ..

I hasten to warn

thee it is

still far too sweet

for this

hunger of mine

and I do

occasionally fear,

that it can

no longer be sated ..

 

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

This is precisely how I feel about poetry I never feel satiated both in reading and in writing I'm a bottomless pit of crave just as soon as i finish (if there ever was a thing "a finished poem") I'm off to the next one then I start reading and that one leads to another and another before long my eyes start to bulge no amount of counseling has helped yes brother Nev I know that feeling well

[Neville]

Phew .. thank goodness for that, I was beginning to feel quite alone .. thank you Robert your reassurance arrived just in the nick of time .. 😉👍

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

By the way, reading your poem has made my mood for food and feelings collide—now I’m both emotionally and gastronomically insatiable! So, it's not really about food, but my hunger got the best of me.

Your poem is like a never-ending buffet of feelings— A thirst that even all the world's Gatorade can't quench. Your endless hunger is a bottomless pit, not even a pizza delivery can fill.

I guess I have got to get offline now to go get my lunch! 😂😂😂😁

[Neville]

Bless you my friend .. have the next helping on me 😉👍

[Dylan Macadham]

...to coin new words, if you no longer be Sateable, perhaps it's time you be Sainthooded!
As always, I enjoyed this one! :)

[Neville]

I am overfilled with an abundance of gratitudeness .. cheers .. 😎🍷👍

[Lorry]

Why doi have the urge for this review to simply be "Women, eh?... pfft!"
But there you go. I've said too much! 😃

[Neville]

Won't tell a soul Loz .. honest 😎👍xx