Double Checking Our Favourite Positions

Double Checking Our Favourite Positions

A Poem by Neville

Double Checking Our Favourite Positions

 


counting backwards


and down in


reverse alphabetical


order I did note


at that time, we were


   both on letter Z ..


oh’ my word, whatever


next she asked


and where might we go


   from here ..


I don’t have a clue her


   lover replied ..


maybe we ought to try


throwing a dice


or something and take


   it from there,


 before agreeing, on what

   

   feels the most comfortable ..

 

© 2025 Neville


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Didn't come up double six, and by double six I am somehow trying to crowbar the word jackpot out of that!
Dice have never been luck for me. Its either go straight to jail or not collecting some much needed bucks, unless you count the time iglued them to an eulers disc, but I won't know how lucky that is until it stops spinning... in about 2036! 😃

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Weeks Ago


If you ever wanna borrow one of my dices with six dots on each side, just give us a nod Loz .. read more
Lorry

4 Weeks Ago

Bloody beauroc...byoorocracy! 😃



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Superb work, my friend. Excellent.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Neville

3 Weeks Ago


many thanks my good man .. 😎👍
...sends a mind a-reeling! Don't know from experience, but I imagine it's not E Z, that having exhausted all entwining's, to invent a new alphabet. ...But you can bet I'm gonna stay tuned!😃

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Weeks Ago


Cheers Dylan 😎👍
Interesting work. Enjoyed reading.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Weeks Ago


thank you friend .. Neville
What is that song by Bowie ... modern love.

"There's no sign of life
It's just the power to charm"

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Weeks Ago


Good old DB .. Charmed, I'm sure PF .. N 😉
Didn't come up double six, and by double six I am somehow trying to crowbar the word jackpot out of that!
Dice have never been luck for me. Its either go straight to jail or not collecting some much needed bucks, unless you count the time iglued them to an eulers disc, but I won't know how lucky that is until it stops spinning... in about 2036! 😃

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Weeks Ago


If you ever wanna borrow one of my dices with six dots on each side, just give us a nod Loz .. read more
Lorry

4 Weeks Ago

Bloody beauroc...byoorocracy! 😃

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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A Poem by Neville