Inprismed

Inprismed

A Poem by Neville

Inprismed



Securely locked up


and cloaked


in exquisite shades


like some


bird of paradise


standing


proudly in its own


magnificent


multicoloured light ..


Is surely,


the way I last recall


seeing her ..


Although now I fear


my eyes may


have deceived me ..


Since such


intrinsic beauty later


proved to be


nothing but a series


of callous,


contradictory illusions ..


 

© 2025 Neville


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Yes, I relate. Painful growth is what I now call it. superb work.

Posted 23 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

23 Hours Ago


you are write on that score my friend cheers
You reminded me of the Eagles song, "Lying Eyes". I'm a firm believer in what goes around, comes around. But to be deceived in love, that's some kind of pain!

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Day Ago


I believe in that too Kelly .. just be sure I appreciate you calling on me like this .. & tr.. read more
Yep! Been there, done that and goy the t shirt.
What starts as all pretty shiny shinies doesn't take long to tarnish in the cold light of day.
Nicely put Nev.

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Day Ago


That'll do nicely Loz .. ta ... 😉👍xx

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Added on February 9, 2025
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..

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