When it All Seemed to Fit

When it All Seemed to Fit

 

There was a time once

     it all seemed to fit ..

When our bodies were

perfectly dovetailed

   

   and our lights were all lit ..

Reviews

[Dylan Macadham]

Wide-eyed and innocent!
Alas, we're now in Happily Ever After,
Good one!

[Neville]

thank you kindly for visiting my little scribble ..

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

Beautifully captures a moment of perfect harmony and connection between two people. I could relate having few moments I would look back at. It's amazing how poetry can resonate with our own experiences and evoke memories of cherished moments.

[Neville]

thank you so much .. neville

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

You're welcome!