Like Butterflies in Snowstorms

Like Butterflies in Snowstorms

A Poem by Neville

Like Butterflies in Snowstorms

 


Thanks for reading me wrong


   and for deleting me ..


You have completely undone


and released all

   

the good that was ever in me ..


So surely, it’s high time

   

for each of us to move forward ..


Nothing at all, really


matters now does it, in the end


it all comes down to


pretence like an image projected


onto some opaque


mirror or screen that does not


   bleed, but it feels


nonetheless .. and today, we are


lost and in one hell of


a mess, both shattered and torn


   at the seams to the core ..


Blown like some rare and fragile


butterfly into a blinding

    

colourless grave held by a snowstorm ..


 

© 2024 Neville


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Well not that I'm an expert on the subject or anything like that, but I do find that over time people do regret doing it, unless it's just a handy way of getting rid of an annoying twat who thinks they're slways right no matter how many times you give them the real reason you blocked them and they still insist on asking friends to ask the me in this situation why me blocked him, then having the front to block them because he didn't like their answer!
But enough about Australians who think their every thought is a poem (well he buddy started it)
I do like your more prosaic way of dealing with it though, as opposed to my "annoying twat", so it is obviously someone worth more (in thought at least) than a "begone you annoying that!"
But as I said, not an expert, which might make more than a few splitter over their coffee and cornflakes when they read it.....Good!
😃

Posted 9 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Hours Ago


Yeah' good .. ta Loz, you just took the sting out of it .. I feel whole again .. mostly .. s.. read more



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Well not that I'm an expert on the subject or anything like that, but I do find that over time people do regret doing it, unless it's just a handy way of getting rid of an annoying twat who thinks they're slways right no matter how many times you give them the real reason you blocked them and they still insist on asking friends to ask the me in this situation why me blocked him, then having the front to block them because he didn't like their answer!
But enough about Australians who think their every thought is a poem (well he buddy started it)
I do like your more prosaic way of dealing with it though, as opposed to my "annoying twat", so it is obviously someone worth more (in thought at least) than a "begone you annoying that!"
But as I said, not an expert, which might make more than a few splitter over their coffee and cornflakes when they read it.....Good!
😃

Posted 9 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Hours Ago


Yeah' good .. ta Loz, you just took the sting out of it .. I feel whole again .. mostly .. s.. read more
Yes, Neville... held Captive like Butterflies in a Snowstorm... one and all.
Will we fall or fly again. The suspense is unbearable... a Mystery that is not solved. Pat

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Day Ago


Thanks Pat and gently .. you can beat an egg but you can't beat a half decent mystery can ya.. read more

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Added on December 17, 2024
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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