Strategically Lost

Strategically Lost

A Poem by Neville
"

it is what it is and nothing more .. so don't go looking too deeply 🤍

"

Strategically Lost



It was there where we lay,


I got so dreadfully lost


and for a moment or two


was quite beside myself ..



Drowning,


but slow in those


deep luxurious folds


our shadows


did then jointly cast ..



As we became naked


together


and bathed in the warm


afterglow


of old cranberry glass ..



Which by some chance


she had strategically


placed on the mantelshelf ..


next to her previous lovers ..



I am now a man of infinite


leisure and can do


anything she wants me to


and in abundance at her pleasure ..

 

 

© 2024 Neville


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I am amazingly awed by this masterful exploration of love, loss, and the timeless dance of human connection. Your ability to weave such rich imagery and emotion into words is truly commendable.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece!

Happy Holidays!

Respectfully,
G

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Weeks Ago


You are far too generous and kind my dear Gregoria & so very muchly appreciated too .. Happy.. read more



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I am amazingly awed by this masterful exploration of love, loss, and the timeless dance of human connection. Your ability to weave such rich imagery and emotion into words is truly commendable.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece!

Happy Holidays!

Respectfully,
G

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Weeks Ago


You are far too generous and kind my dear Gregoria & so very muchly appreciated too .. Happy.. read more
I won't look too deeply... what I see is passion, intimacy, pleasure from a loved one, drowning in her folds is pretty wonderful...and let it last...even though she had previous lovers, you are now THE ONE! so soak up all of it since you will do anything she desires....So go for it Neville!
Lovely write!
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Weeks Ago


I am glad you felt able to avert your eyes my very dearest of Betty's & still make out clear.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Weeks Ago

A;ways a pleasure!
Warmly, B

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Added on December 10, 2024
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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