Crushed

crushed, cold, hungry and homeless 🤍 for all those without roofs over their heads this winter ..

Crushed

 

gentle walk in snow

white crunches beneath both feet

snail shells break quietness

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar probs but dig deep into pockets before passing official homeless collecting personnel .. the giving of practical things like a hot drinks, food and toiletries are often safer & more sensible to give than cash handouts .. cheers & a merry run up to Xmas to all ..

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Neville... A Haiku to guide you through until Christmas Eve...
gently, Pat Holly and hugs...

[Neville]

That'll do nicely Pat .. I'll take it .. thanks & gently ..

[AYVID N]

Such compassion in your words. You feel their pain and think of them.

[Neville]

knowing the reality of it means it's the least I can do .. bless you my friend .. Neville

[Lorry]

That should be the saying on all Christmas cards mate, alongside "merry commercial exploitation of a once meaningful occasion" on opening the card!

[Neville]

Do you reckon there's any dosh in it mate? I'm just asking for a friend whose saving up to go uni and study how to become a influencer 🖤🐧👍xx

[Lorry]

Really? Isn't that one of them freeloaders who expect everything for free?
Sign me up to then! 😃

[Neville]

Consider it done Loz 🐧😎👍xx

[Thomas W Case]

You paint this picture very well.

[Neville]

very well I'm gonna say thank you & truly ..