Yukiko Snow Child

Yukiko Snow Child

 

blinding white sheets glow

where cool cherry blossoms smiled

hunger suckled away

 

 

 

Author's Note

Yet not quite a Haiku .. and all because of a single L .. 🐧🤍

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i was attracted to this poem from the distinctly japanese sounding name. i'm guessing you have visited us before? the sakura blossom is one you have to see with your own eyes. and the last line is perfect. when something is so beautiful, you can even forget you are hungry.

[Neville]

Dōmo arigatōgozaimasu .. yes, I have been twice and have another trip planned for next year .. All Good Things & thanks again .. Neville

[Thomas W Case]

Wow. You paint a vivid picture.

[Neville]

Many thanks Thomas .. Neville

[AYVID]

Smiling cherry blossoms are indescribably beautiful. And so is the memory of them, easing every pain. You created such a pretty picture with words.

[Neville]

Thank you so much .. Such kindly visits make it all worthwhile .. Neville

[AYVID]

Enjoy the journey ✨️
You're welcome.

[emmajoygreen]

Beautiful, visual, memorable

[Neville]

Many thanks indeed.