The Look

The Look

A Poem by Neville
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The Look


She looked at him,


then turned


away again fast ..


Like he was


just one more old


man in a


very large crowd ..


But then he


was just another


old man in a


very long row of


standard


issue white metal


hospital beds


and he knew that ..


And as well


as the look that


she gave him


in passing, maybe


it would


have been kinder


and easier


for them both


if she had


just turned away


and not


smiled at him like


that since ..


He knew that look


only too


well perhaps ..


Indeed, it was one


of those


knowingly over


familiar


quasi-flirtatious


yet still


uncomfortable


looks


reserved for all


those on


whom empathy


could not


possibly be wasted ..


He had used it


himself


countless times on


those who


probably hadn’t


that much time left ..


 


 

 

© 2024 Neville


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This was a gut twisting read. He had given others that look and now it was him being given that look and how he must shiver! Says so much about how life comes a full circle. Time will spare no one. You thrust the blade deep here.

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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