Out in The Open

Out in The Open

A Poem by Neville
"

I'll leave it up to you .. because I'll never know anyway .. 🤍

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Out in The Open



It is so very cold here,


out in the open like this ..


Even beside you,


I still shiver and freeze ..


As eventually, I began


to realise


there was no longer


any warmth


left at all in your tone,


your touch,


or the way that you feel ..


Indeed, your truest


of colours have


either been leaked,


had run away, or are now


very long flown ..


However, it seems they


are no longer hiding


right out, in the open ..


Yet still, it is


cold here, right down to


the bone and beyond


and such a very long way


from the home


we once used to reside


and make love in ..


When out of the blue


I recalled


from the platform how


much I always enjoyed


the smell


of coal burning


and the warm breath


of steam rising,


as it unashamedly kissed


me the very


same insane moment,


I eventually, dared to let go ..


 


 

 

© 2024 Neville


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Added on September 17, 2024
Last Updated on November 15, 2024

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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