Haiku # Woken by Doves

575 just happens to be my lucky number

Haiku # Woken by Doves

 

how lucky we are

how soft, our morning arrives

   

 awoken by doves ..

 

 

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

to be awoken by doves... it's a great image. i take it to mean gratitude for being alive. life is happening right now and how incredible, amazing that is. one ought to wake every morning, and be thankful we are still here. and seize the opportunity to live life to its fullest.

[Neville]

I know the term love is often miss used and likewise overused and abused .. but it kinda fits in with the way your gift of a review just made me feel and I thank you for it .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

A soft morning being woken by doves sounds like heaven. I am not a morning person so it is best to tread lightly until I’ve had coffee or sex lmao truth but if I got up to this scene it would definitely make me smile

[Neville]

if you ever struggle for zzz's give us shout and I'll pop around and put your kettle on

[Poetic Beauty]

It depends…
Some night I sleep quite soundly and others it broken asleep all night long or waking after only 5 hours of sleep. Quite random really

[Dylan Macadham]

My second visit. Haha, was I wrong about the 3rd line, or did you add a Syll? :)
...Yes, such a morning that would be!

[Neville]

I do so enjoy second helpings .. thanks for taking another peek .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful haiku. Loved it as if I see first ray of sun touching my eyes

[Neville]

what a wonderful thing to say .. bless you my friend .. Neville

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful imagery and so serene.

[Neville]

cheers T .. N 😎👍

[Red Brick Keshner]

……. And Have a great New Year!

[Neville]

cheers mate .. & you .. 😎👍

[Dylan Macadham]

Oops ... 3rd line has 4 sylls.
How about "Woken by a dove" ?
~Haiku Police :))

[Neville]

Thanks for taking a peek .. Neville