Just a Few Thoughts on Getting Even

Just a Few Thoughts on Getting Even

A Poem by Neville
"

this is so very not me .. let's just call it a prototype for now ..

"

Just a Few Thoughts on Getting Even

 


I never get drunk enough


these days,


to think about culling you ..


I just hope,


beyond hope someone


might come


along one day and cull you


on my behalf ..

 

 

 

 

© 2024 Neville


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This a very strong comment, culling is to choose or single you out in some way.. could be positive or negative… but in your state of mind, it seems to be more negative… as you want it done by you or someone else…
A few powerful words, like it!
Warmly B🌷

Posted 3 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Months Ago


We don't have the death penalty here in the UK
Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

Then you’re safe🌷
Neville

3 Months Ago


........................ phew 😎👍🌹



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To me it seems like you are fantasizing about outsourcing some dirty behavior. Could be worse, some people carry out their dirty behavior in real life. It can be disturbing as I'm sure you are aware. Way to keep it in house my man.

I like the writing style as well. It's easily digestible. I hope you modify it so I can read it again and modify my review.


Posted 3 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Months Ago


I will leave as is, for now, but thanks for making up the numbers.
REminds me of the old song by Del Shannon called "Hats off to Larry".....

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Months Ago

at first, I wasn't sure whether I was familiar with that particular number but when I played it, it .. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

3 Months Ago

I had forgotten that was his real name...thanks for the reminder...
I was 11 when that song c.. read more
This is so good and reassuring to read, dear Neville. Sometimes, one can let life take its course and for sure someone comes along to cull our enemies. We just have to wait to drink to that. It happens. Loved it!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Months Ago

I think we just got cut off .. but be sure I will cull you back later .. Neville
Though I am of British descent, I speak English, but not Brit. Kindly define "cull."

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Months Ago

The word 'Cull' can either be a verb essentially meaning to kill or reduce and remove animals or pla.. read more
GlendaK

3 Months Ago

Don't cull me. I'll cull you.
John the Baptist

3 Months Ago

Well, me boyos, if you ever get in trouble, you can always cull on me.
This a very strong comment, culling is to choose or single you out in some way.. could be positive or negative… but in your state of mind, it seems to be more negative… as you want it done by you or someone else…
A few powerful words, like it!
Warmly B🌷

Posted 3 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Months Ago


We don't have the death penalty here in the UK
Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

Then you’re safe🌷
Neville

3 Months Ago


........................ phew 😎👍🌹
Nicely written poem. It is good not to be a drunkard.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Months Ago


I quite agree .. cheers

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