A World That Was

A World That Was

A Poem by Neville

A World That Was

 


There was a time once, when it all


    seemed to fit ..


When the machine did what


it was told


   and there was none of this s**t ..


Long before


we were programmed and told


   what to do ..


When we all had a conscience


and purpose


when our sky and the seas, were


   still blue ..


Yes, there was a time once, when


everything clicked


 long before AI or prefabricated truth


and all of this

  

 mind numbing, fake news bullshit ..


Yes, there once


was a time, when our seas were


the home to


dolphins, whales and a whole


   heap of fish ..


Not just chemicals, discarded


diapers, plastics

   

   assorted waste and other such s**t ..


There was a time


once when you could walk into


a bar without


fretting, neck one or two and walk


out again without


any fear of getting stabbed, shot


spiked or being

   

subjected, to all kinds of other s**t ..

 

 

© 2024 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
spiked = the covert placing of alcohol or more commonly drugs into someone's drink without them knowing

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Hi Neiv.

What to be worried is not worried anymore
But worrisome with wear worry are worried.

Never mind,
Dont worty all those chemicals plastics. And more will be thrown out with natural things that make dirt out and the home will look better.
I could see better charm in chris face with a smile.
Love you so much hour writings,

Do take rest and focus on what is important.

Jessy jacob.
Love for you💜


Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hiren

7 Months Ago

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The contrast between life as we knew it and life as we now know it is simply mind blowing and difficult though it is, you have encapsulated it from A to Z in this simply, but superbly crafted thought provoking poem, Neville. For those of us who lived in the 'old world', the 'new world' we presently live in is very alien and you have captured everything which makes it so very finely, Neville. Thank you for writing this poem and for sharing it, dear poet. Blessings for a very lovely day...

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Months Ago


its so sad that we should both think similarly isn't it ..
Marie

7 Months Ago

Great minds think alike, Neville and fools seldom differ :-) We are both thinking from the experienc.. read more
Neville

7 Months Ago


there is much truth in that old saying isn't there :)
It does seem the times are worse now than they used to be, and this is no "good old days"
yearning. I have never seen the world in worse shape than it is now.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Months Ago


.......... snap .. I don't mean literally I mean .. duh you know what I mean, cheers .. Nevi.. read more
I felt the turn about twenty years ago. Since then it has gathered momentum. The rot appears to be here to stay. To say I fear for my grandchildren would be an understatement. More cheerful for ya, but you say it like it’s painted on the tin. Clear, bold and truthful.

Chris

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Months Ago


is there really any other way .. if there is and it works or it is better .. then somebody p.. read more
Chris Shaw

7 Months Ago

I’d rather the truth than sleep walk into a nightmare of not knowing. I will keep looking for the .. read more
Neville

7 Months Ago


...... No worries I've got ya back covered.
dear Nev... this is much more of a Terror than Gone With The Wind. It should have been "nipped in the Bud". The worst is The Precious Children and young people with Hopes and Dreams. "Where have all the Flowers Gone" ? There is definitely the force of Evil and the force of Good. We must pray to the Spirit that we are given .. to conquer the Evil. Tenderly, Pat

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Months Ago


I'm so glad you feel it my way Pat .. I do fear for the children and my grandchild .. kindly.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

Darling Neville.. this is more than Man-made decisions.. the Force of Evil must be Conquered and pu.. read more
Neville

3 Months Ago


I shall perform a little embu when I feel strong enough .. gently Neville
I can remember an easier time when I was growing up. I think I picked time. My parents endured war as children. I think the children born in the 70s might have has it best. The rules of engagement with society have certainly changed and not for the better.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Months Ago


I like your idea of picking time Ana .. I am sure some of my early memories are among my bes.. read more
Papaya

7 Months Ago

I'm glad you liked that idea but I think it was a typo 😕 🤷🏻‍♀️😅
Neville

7 Months Ago


................................... ono :)
We can only hope. Great work.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Months Ago


............. and dream of course .. cheers T .. N
Hi Neiv.

What to be worried is not worried anymore
But worrisome with wear worry are worried.

Never mind,
Dont worty all those chemicals plastics. And more will be thrown out with natural things that make dirt out and the home will look better.
I could see better charm in chris face with a smile.
Love you so much hour writings,

Do take rest and focus on what is important.

Jessy jacob.
Love for you💜


Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hiren

7 Months Ago

What miss olla you want to break my head ?? Come mahishasura this durga will cut your throat... dont.. read more
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
hiren

7 Months Ago

Dear princess and prince, there is no service more than serving parents. That will return you back a.. read more

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