Don’t You Dare Die Just Yet

for all those who feel bitter and scorned ..

Don’t You Dare Die Just Yet

Don’t you dare die,

at least not

just yet, she pleaded 

and begged ..

I need you to suffer

so bad and so

long at my personal

expense

and of course at my

pleasure ..

She shamelessly said ..

But firstly,

I want you to sweat

and to bleed ..

Before I hear you cry

out my name and repent ..

 

 

 

Author's Note

Please feel both free and able, to substitute she for he, if you should so desire and of course, at no additional charge whatsoever .. Neville 🤍

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Repent. Says it all. Fanatical behaviour from what appears to be a sadist or worse, inflicting as much pain on another for pleasure. I haven’t met anyone fortunately like that, but I wouldn’t be surprised if you have in your line of business. That’s got the day off to a painful start:) Why can’t some people just bow out gracefully if it ain’t working? Good sunny Tuesday Neville.

And then there was Glenn Close in Lethal Attraction, the bunny boiler. Oh my goodness be careful :)) !!

Chris

[Neville]

bunny boilers, ha.. I piss on em before dunking my first rich tea .. but thanks for the warnin Chris :)

[Papaya]

I have made appropriate substitutes, per your note, and added my own accents as appropriate.
Strong write. I've no problem endorsing a little suffering if deserved.

[Neville]

that feels so bloomin good .. thank you Ana :)

[Papaya]

You're welcome 🙂

[Neville]

Okay, I submit .............. 😊

[JD Major]

I was in a similar place for a while a long long time ago. Thankfully, I managed to get out before the hate consumed me. ...Hate can make a person smaller and smaller til there's nothing left.
...A dark place, a good write!

[Neville]

there are bad places .. and there are bad places .. cheers JD

[Poetic Beauty]

Makes me wonder what the person did to her. Typically when people act out like this it is some sort of vengeance they are after well or a psychopath or sociopath. This is powerful and says so much in a few lines.

[Neville]

there's more of em about than many might imagine .. they are here n there n everywhere .. just sayin on behalf of me n an old friend .. Cheers PB .. N :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Yes there are definitely many of them out there. Some never act on their whatever you want to call it and some do.

Scary thought though

[Neville]

just be careful and stay safe my friend .. Neville