Ouroboros

Ouroboros

What is it with us

and how

much is it worth ..

And what

will it be the love

or the lust

that which, first

gives up the

proverbial ghost ..

And for

what purpose,

or reason ..

And pray where

upon this

oh’ so tainted,

sainted earth do

I begin

and you end,

my love of loves ..

I plan to eat

you regardless ..

Like Dali planned

once to

eat his love Gala

on toast ..

But not for some

obscure

symbolic reason ..

I just want

to be a perfect circle ..

 

Author's Note

rather than go chasing ya tail, don't be afraid to go look it up ..

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Had to research this one, N. Seems there is a serpent called the rat snake that does consume itself. Sounds like a somewhat conflicted romance you've got going there. At any rate, don't pay any attention to Dali. He should have stuck to one of his soft watches. They're much more digestible than a lover.

[Neville]

I must confess I am most surprised .. I was going to call it a meditation on mastication .. but was concerned about the dyslexics .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

To be consumed by at tainted love that keepings doing the same cycle over and over again until one of the parties consumes the other

[Neville]

.. Bless you PB just a suggestion, always carry a spare pack of antacids to aid the digestion .. All Good Things,

Neville :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Well I do not want lan on consuming anyone anytime soon or in the future lol 😂 but I will keep the antacids in mind 🤣🤣🤣

[Neville]

it makes sense, just in case you get unexpectedly hungry 😎👍

[Poetic Beauty]

Might need ranch lol

[Neville]

You just never know do ya 🙂

[Poetic Beauty]

Laughing 😂

[Neville]

they tell me it's good for you .. ((😁😆))

[Anita Frader]

Of course, the ending is perfect and yet not obvious.
A delicious poetic feast, sir.

[Neville]

if that's a yes, then I am delighted you should look so favourably upon my little scribble Anita .. many thanks indeed .. Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

The Circle of Love ❤️ is never ending. Be Brave and Create a 🎶. Song… tenderly, Pat

[Neville]

something like that perhaps but even more gentle .. thank you Pat

[Ken Simm.]

Chasing your tail might have so many meanings but your is profound as well as somewhat romantic.

[Neville]

almost precisely my objective then Ken .. ta, N :)

[Stella Armour]

i suppose it doesn't really matter if you enjoy the food of love .. which way you have it ... .😋

[Neville]

it helps first to have an appetite .. and then there are those who always think they are hungry .. AGT's Stella .. Neville