Well Done

Well Done

I don’t want to be a cliché

or dance

with shadow children on

distant balconies ..

That’s not what balconies

are for now, is it ..

I want to sit and watch you

   read your kindle ..

While the sun goes down

and we both blister ..

Before that is, we each turn,

golden brown ..

 

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Balconies are not for parties or dancing...but for relaxing in the sun....not blister but to turn golden brown....and reading is an excellent idea for sitting on a balcony as the sun sets... loved it! Spoof on balcony parties!! imagery fantastic....
Warmly, B

[Neville]

Bless you Betty .. and warmly back at you .. Best for 2024 too .. Neville

[Betty Hermelee]

Best to you too and all good things for 2024!
Warmly, B

[poetgurl]

Happy Holidays, I was alone on mine.
This is really good, liked the imagery.

[Neville]

Thank you so much & back at you Meg .. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Holiday bliss I reckon. Perfect view of the sea, sunset, heat and ice cold drinks. A harmonious poem if ever there was one. Well done Neville:)

Chris

[Neville]

Thanks for seeing it my way our Chris .. and for being the only one so far ..

Have a FAB New Years Eve and a healthy, happy, safe and fulfilling 2024 .. Neville