From a Little Book of Sins

From a Little Book of Sins

 

such is life ..

such are relationships ..

and such are our tribulations ..

then of course, we write about them ..

and somehow create a kind of delicious circle ..

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Shape poetry is in fashion. I have seen a few recently. Your title is catchy. A little book of sins. We all have them, to deny it would be telling a porkie pie. No one is without sin. Here we have a triangle with sharp edges. Those delicious circles sound much friendlier. An intriguing write Neville. Have a wonderful and restful Sunday.

Chris

[Neville]

you describe me perfectly .. although I appreciate it is not always easy to be objective where self image/perception is concerned .. but hey, I almost digressed and at such an acute angle I may have caused myself some harm .. a narrow escape .. but as far as my scribble is concerned, you are as darn near always, spot on .. thank you Neville

[Stella Armour]

As we write about them we change our mindset, and they become something entirely different ...

If i had a little book of sins Neville i would peek in and smile :))

[Neville]

it's what we do isn't it stella .. I would probably change the title to 'Taken From My Little Book of BIG Sins' .. :))

[Stella Armour]

I like that idea .... lol

[Neville]

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