From a Little Book of Sins

From a Little Book of Sins

 

such is life ..

such are relationships ..

and such are our tribulations ..

then of course, we write about them ..

and somehow create a kind of delicious circle ..

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Shape poetry is in fashion. I have seen a few recently. Your title is catchy. A little book of sins. We all have them, to deny it would be telling a porkie pie. No one is without sin. Here we have a triangle with sharp edges. Those delicious circles sound much friendlier. An intriguing write Neville. Have a wonderful and restful Sunday.

Chris

[Neville]

you describe me perfectly .. although I appreciate it is not always easy to be objective where self image/perception is concerned .. but hey, I almost digressed and at such an acute angle I may have caused myself some harm .. a narrow escape .. but as far as my scribble is concerned, you are as darn near always, spot on .. thank you Neville

[Thomas W Case]

Superb work in its brevity. I dig this.

[Neville]

and I dug that .. ta Tom .. Neville

[Ken Simm.]

That is certainly true. And I like it a lot.

[Neville]

it is absolutely true .. the fact you like it at all is a bonus .. thanks Ken .. Neville read more
it is absolutely true .. the fact you like it at all is a bonus .. thanks Ken .. Neville

[willweb]

I like to think I write them out of me but that never seems to work. Those memories seem to linger on no matter what I do (And I would have it no other way) Nice one Neville

[Neville]

A much appreciated self disclosive visit willweb .. Cheers my friend .. Neville

[JD Major]

Omigod! You so Nailed it, Neville!
It is a circle, as you say. And there actually can be comfort in misery.

[Neville]

................. Cheers JD muchly appreciated, N :)

[Papaya]

We can relive these moments forever when we capture them in our mental library.
Lovely ⭐

[Neville]

You got it Ana .. you share me yours and I'll share thee mine .. Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville… does SIN stand for Sassy Intriguing Nonsense? It depends on the Weather … if the Sky is Blue… then you may be also. We are having Puddles of Rain so I Splash along. gently, Pat

[Neville]

you know far better than to ask a gentleman to divulge dear Pat .. but thank you for this gentle visit regardless .. Neville

[John the Baptist]

If your book of sins is little, does that mean you haven't had any fun?

[Neville]

not at all sir .. in fact I have been toying with being even more transparent and changing the title to 'Abstracts from a Big Book of Many Mighty Sins' or something similar .. Seasons Best sir .. Neville

[Matthew Kult]

Love the title and love the structure. Flows magically. Wonderful write and read.

With love

Matthew

[Neville]

what could possibly be better than that .. thank you so much Matt .. Best wishes to you and yours .. Neville

[FGFRANKLIN]

It's a use, rinse, repeat sort of world and I don't mean the shampoo experience, this is a cool little poem, I enjoyed the read.

[Neville]

aye pop a pill, push a button, tick a box kinda world .. I like what you left here my friend, thank you .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Sure, you wrote here the truth. Good job 👍

[Neville]

I certainly tried .. thank you and kindly .. Neville