Just a Blanket of Wild Violets

Just a Blanket of Wild Violets

A Poem by Neville

Just a Blanket of Wild Violets



I forget just how many times


we made out


beneath our favourite tree


with no one but


the birds, a few buzzing things


and the odd bunny


   watching over us for company ..


Indeed, it now seems


so very strange to think back


   on us like that ..


Like maybe, we never really


   played there at all ..


Since nothing marks the spot


nor the importance


   of such lost private moments ..


No trace of you or me


except perhaps for an incongruent


   blanket of wild violets ..

 

© 2023 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
don't worry about it .. I'm used to it by now ..

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Wonderful work and a beautiful memory. There are many places where I have memories that have no memory of me. You writing flows so easily and beautifully. So lovely

With love

Matthew

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Months Ago


Hi Matt .. Many very sincere thanks for stopping by and considering my most recent posting ... read more
Beautiful Neville. Completely and utterly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Months Ago


Go on, make my evening why don'tcha .. cheers sir K
dear Neville… this is a quaint love 💗 poem that brings a sound of violins 🎻 and innocence of wonderment. gently, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


and quietly sent .. with no strings attached .. but gently so nevatheless .. Neville 🐣�.. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

You are the quiet moments when Winds become blankets of Violets … and the morning Sun will bring a.. read more
Neville

11 Months Ago


Arigato my very dearest of Pats .. 💛👍🐣🐤🐥N
This is just lovely. Some memories just never fade, but remain always. You have captured the feeling most magically.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


How extraordinarily kind you indeed are ma'am ..
I really am most appreciative .. Al.. read more
The wild violets mark the spot. Planted firmly in your memory, not forgotten and now woven into a poem. Quite lovely Neville.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Months Ago


how very true .. I also have a thing about Taunton train station ..
Chris Shaw

11 Months Ago

Funny that. I went there once you know :)
Neville

11 Months Ago


get outa here, you're kiddin write ..

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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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