Whispered

Whispered

no one was looking

so he hid

a whispered secret

deep

within the perfect

folds

of the new babies

ear ..

and she smiled back

at him ..

knowing for sure

in that

whisp of a whisper ..

she was

more than just merely

loved ..

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I instantly think of that picture you posted on Facebook of you and your new granddaughter:) This also reminds me of the day I came home from the hospital and got to hold my latest granddaughter on Christmas eve:)

[Neville]

Days to remember eh' thanks for coming back to us Robert :)

[Matthew Kult]

An excellent portrait of love and beauty. Lovely write and beautiful read.

With love,

Matthew

[Neville]

thank you Matthew .. you are most kind .. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

A lovely picture here for your readers. I wonder what was whispered in that little shell like ear. I would loved to have seen that smile for Grandad:) There’s alot of love in these lines Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

.. a grandad neva tells tho' Chris .. it's our secret for ever n ever .. thank you tho' Chris as always ..

Neville :)