The Measure of a Single Year

The Measure of a Single Year

A Poem by Neville

The Measure of a Single Year



The making


of a single year


these days,


means nothing ..


No matter


how measured


or filled ..


Nor whether


by heartbeats,


by breaths,


or by tears


or individual


fallen leaves ..


The length


of a single year


these days


means nothing ..

© 2023 Neville


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I can appreciate and concur when I think of the measuring of a year, but alas I cannot bring myself to feel the same about a day (not implying that you do or have here stated) But it has raised the question in me, how do I measure the making and the length of a day. Thanks for the wake up call - Measuring the Length of a Day - going to work on that one. -carl

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Neville

1 Year Ago


Thank you carl for considering my little scribble .. much appreciated sir .. Neville



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I can appreciate and concur when I think of the measuring of a year, but alas I cannot bring myself to feel the same about a day (not implying that you do or have here stated) But it has raised the question in me, how do I measure the making and the length of a day. Thanks for the wake up call - Measuring the Length of a Day - going to work on that one. -carl

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Thank you carl for considering my little scribble .. much appreciated sir .. Neville
That is why we must learn to appreciate our time. Nobody else will.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


absolutely bang on target .. cheers JtB .. N
The way time is unfelt is a heartbreaking and thoughtful concept, we all experience years and time differently, and you have captured that well :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


how very kind of you nadia .. many thanks for visiting and leaving a little of yourself behi.. read more
Chris during the civil war in this county Lincoln declare half measure so we could win the war but we were lost until Grant a drunk won the war by a half measure I may be wrong in reading your write but it brought back memories, you are a good writer.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

no sometimes I get in this reading mode I forget who wrote it, sorry, still a good write.
Neville

1 Year Ago


I've been there and done that before too.
Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

THANK YOU GOOD WRITE
I read this beautiful poem in context of what is currently happening in the Middle East. A year in time is so precious. It makes me reflect on those individual fallen leaves, now lost forever. Here one minute and gone the next. All violence is abhorrent. It fills me with fear and dread. Make each day count, tell your nearest and dearest how loved they are. We never know what’s coming tomorrow. Such sadness here and a feeling of hopelessness Neville.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


thanks for taking a peek our Chris and for that sage bit of advice .. Neville
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

My delight ………

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Added on October 12, 2023
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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