When Someone is Special Enough

When Someone is Special Enough

A Poem by Neville

When Someone is Special Enough

 


it is all in the way



that she does



and the way that she is,



and the way



that she did ..



that made her so very



special to him ..



it is of course possible



if not likely then



he eventually, lost his



mind to her



and sadly, so completely ..

© 2023 Neville


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Infatuation, obsession or love. They can all be so uncomfortable at times. This little poem is special in itself because those emotions can be overpowering. I know that to be true. I find the ending of this poem more than sad. What happens when things go that far. What’s to do? Some will look for an escape route, some will endure the pain. Choices we all have them, in the hope we choose wisely. A poem of the heart’s hurt Neville. Lovely it is, albeit sad.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


thank you for those insightful & encouraging words our Chris .. Neville
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

My delight Neville.



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Good to lose our mind sometimes. Being deep in the hot water of love. Can be nice and cozy Neville. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Cheers Coyote .. please forgive my late but otherwise most sincere acknowledgement .. Nevill.. read more
I believe love always comes later in a relationship. Love at first sight, well I won't bet against it ever happening but you really have to know all you can about another to make the love determination...my opinion only.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


I think maybe we should form a cult sir Will .. thanks tremendously .. Neville :)
Very fun this little gem ... and the line's so fine between love and obsession, delusion and illusion

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


when did you find that out .. I am so effin glad you found me ..
Infatuation, obsession or love. They can all be so uncomfortable at times. This little poem is special in itself because those emotions can be overpowering. I know that to be true. I find the ending of this poem more than sad. What happens when things go that far. What’s to do? Some will look for an escape route, some will endure the pain. Choices we all have them, in the hope we choose wisely. A poem of the heart’s hurt Neville. Lovely it is, albeit sad.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


thank you for those insightful & encouraging words our Chris .. Neville
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

My delight Neville.

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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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