Agnes of God

Agnes of God

A Poem by Neville

Agnes of God

 



Although the echo


of a long and distant


sigh both came


and then, it went


again ..


Much like a much


loved scent


might pass one by ..


For a while


at least, it lingered


fragrant ..


Today though, it is


well and truly spent


and all but gone ..


Much like the


footprints, he once


left there, for her


to find on water ..


And thereupon,


she followed on


behind him ..


Just like some


disciple might or


young and faithful


bride, or daughter ..


Always at least


two steps behind


mind and blindly ..


Through fear


of being last in line,


or getting lost


somewhere in that


splendid


golden dust


of the wake they


each created ..


But then, a poison


made her body swell


and tho’ she later


did confess to having


once been


breached no less ..


She was still pure in


heart at least ..


If not intact, or yet


indeed, still perfect ..


Still, the child


she later bore alone


and in great secret


was conceived no less,


along the self-same


route they took ..


And some now say,


from such a


passion, not since


replicated ..


Sadly tho’ said child,


did die and Agnes too


in heavy chains ..


Yet still, upon her


very own deathbed ..


She did also cry ..


Jesus, I do still love you ..


 


 

© 2023 Neville


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dear Neville… in grade school we studied the Old Testament , and In High School we studied the New Testament. In my Adult Life we suffered the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune as written by Shakespeare. Now we may be in Grave danger. However, your poem is amazing. softly, Pat

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This was such an interesting play because it was based partially on actual events. It's a sad commentary on the religious world that many who call themselves holy can't understand that all life is a gift from God. I've never seen the movie. Whether the actual nun was raped or willingly strayed beyond her oath of celibacy matters little considering she lost her mind and her child. It is written that Jesus wept. I wonder that He weeps not still.

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thank you for checking in kind sir .. very muchly appreciated .. Neville
dear Neville… in grade school we studied the Old Testament , and In High School we studied the New Testament. In my Adult Life we suffered the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune as written by Shakespeare. Now we may be in Grave danger. However, your poem is amazing. softly, Pat

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

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You are amazing Pat .. thank you gently, kindly and true .. and that is a brief testament to.. read more

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