The Most Perfect Love

let the whole world be filled with it .. and to you all in 2023

The Most Perfect Love

 

how he loved the way she

always tried

to manipulate the swell ..

and of course

the way she rode the ever

undulating tide ..

and how she wore him like

a bespoke glove ..

then used him, as a template

to always

make the most perfect love ..

 

 

 

Reviews

[willweb]

I think I knew her, someone else, but someone the same, a perfect fit that felt so comfortable you never wanted to take her off again and then...I see by you reply to Chris..."she was" and I say again, I think I knew her because. well, just because. Very nicely said. A poem that reaches out and touches the reader.

[Neville]

now that will do nicely my friend .. very nicely indeed .. thank you .. N :)

[FGFRANKLIN]

This is just so beautiful, like a song of appreciation to the sweetest love.

[Neville]

thank you most kindly and true sir & welcome to the Café I do so hope you will be happy here ..

[William Michael Reeves]

I liked that idea of the perfect love has a template. Unique to each couple cut by their coupling. Like a silhouette of their merging. Then of course using the template can be a bit of a mess. Each stamping a little different. Perfect imperfection. Love this love poem!

[Neville]

You are far too kind Will and I am so very grateful .. many thanks indeed .. Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Neville… perfect love is Geometry with a template… precision is a Goal … a lovely poem that rests in nests of symmetries. gently, Pat

[Neville]

forgive my very late response to your kind review note and for which I am most grateful .. warmly N

[JENNY]

Love that to by devotional soul is rare these days . Nice one Nivelle.

[Neville]

please excuse my otherwise unforgivable late response to your ever so kind impression of my little scribble .. I am seriously most grateful and such visits are welcome any time .. Neville :)

[JENNY]

Thanks for welcoming my thoughts and wish you a great year ahead.

[Neville]

thanks again my friend and back at ya :)

[Red Brick Keshner]

The glove-liness says it all... a perfect fit in a most perfect love!

[Neville]

it seems you can read me like a book sir .. cheers N:)

[Chris Shaw]

If you have a love who will manipulate the swell and ride the tides by your side in all weathers, especially the stormy types, then you have struck gold. Sadly in these modern times, that sort of devotion is a rarity. Beautiful sentiment in this love poem Neville. She sounds purrfect .


Chris

[Neville]

she was Chris .. thanks again my friend

Neville