Taken From the Diary of a Contented Man

Taken From the Diary of a Contented Man

 

If I was to die right here and now ..

Then I would

die right here today a very happy

man indeed ..

Now I could have said that yesterday

for sure, and maybe

the day before that even, but thought

it was a fluke back then

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha! Neville ... you have beat yourself ... such a fantastic poem!! if i would have one more tat inked on me ... it just might be this one ... "it was a fluke back then" ... yes indeed .. ne're to even consider such possibilities ... until ... well ... right now for me sir! God bless and keep us all .. and shine upon your face my friend .. and those of your kin.
E.

[Neville]

you are such a generous fella our Gene .. and this one just can't thank you enough ..

N.

[Chris Shaw]

Now when you reach that point you have really hit the jackpot. Such an uplifting write Neville. Long may it last my friend.

Chris

[Neville]

there is a certain amount of poetic license therein contained ........ but I like the truth you have pointed me in the direction of Chris ... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

You need less poetic license and more direction :)

[John the Baptist]

It all goes to show that we don't fully appreciate what we have. No day is promised.

[Neville]

You know what, you are so bloomin write JtB :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when we can get to this point of sef-reflection...we are where we need to be.
j.

[Neville]

thanks for the thumbs up jacob .. much appreciated sir.

N.

[Relic]

Being held in those bad days, weeks, or longer can convince us it will never get better. Life holds no promises. But when things are good, we must marinate in them and appreciate them.

[Neville]

my word sir, what good insight you have .. and I thank you for leaving a trace of it here .. Neville

[willweb]

Hey, it is better to be patient test these things before actually saying them out loud. : )

[Neville]

............. maybe ... just maybe :)

[Patricia Wedel]

I want to be wrapped in Pansies under ground and when Spring and Autumn bloom, I will appear. Amen.. Pat

[Neville]

awww bless you too Pat & gently .. you are more than welcome in my garden anytime of year ..

[Tom]

Spiritual strength, sapped and sated, seasonal salutations Neville! 🦾

[Neville]

Bless you brother Tom & back at you & yours my old friend :)