Clearly a Vague Recollection

sometimes, it looks like this, maybe .. but then again :)

Clearly a Vague Recollection

 

The way she wore that plain white

cotton sheet

was really kind of cool, and neat ..

A real turn on too

don’t you think, fresh from the bed

like that, and jeez ..

With all those ribbons in her hair

and an opal in

each lobe, of perfect shell like ears ..

She trailed

that makeshift shawl behind her

all but naked ..

And quite unashamed, with nothing

more to lose or fear,

or even hide, oh’ yes indeed, it was

then she turned

and said, come to me darling

smelling of time itself

old clocks and magnificent cathedrals ..

Yes come to me,

for it is time to listen, watch and learn ..

Since this, dear heart

is how it works when broken, and you

my lord shall surely

sleep safe, sound and well tonight ..

 

Author's Note

perhaps I am not a robot after all ..

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

White cotton sheets remind me of ghosts, so perhaps this is a delicious memory from way back or even a fantasy or a dream. Your words certainly have a dream like quality to them. There is however nothing vague about them and I am drawn to the fine detail Opals, ribbons and scent. They caught my imagination and I found my mind wandering and enquiring whether my own ear jewels and scent had ever been remembered by anyone with such clarity. A most definite Neville write, your muse is working well. Nothing robotic about this. Isn't it annoying how we are frequently asked these days whether we are a robot :)

Chris

[Neville]

I have no doubt your scent and ear jewels are remembered fondly and often ... thank you for such an awesome review comment Chris :)

[John the Baptist]

Chicks in nothing but white sheets do it for me, clock and cathedral smell be damned.

[Neville]

certainly not to be sniffed at .. thank you for that sir ..

[Lisasview]

Good morning Neville
Such a lovely fable of lust and love…bringing into it the warmth of time I lived it.
Lisa, reading and reviewing on the elliptical

[Neville]

How very kind .. Many seriously sincere thanks ..
Neville having just got home and about to assume the horizontal for some zzzzzz's

[light and ashes]

You seem very taken with your muse. That's good :)

[Neville]

a gentleman never tells but it was one of those days when everything just seemed to fall into place .. thanking you kindly L & A :)

[light and ashes]

You are very welcome.
:)

[lightsong]

and that's is a classical masterpiece... as also I was taken to those favorite classical movie scenes. oh well! what more to say?? robot!? lol reading this, You are the most alive robot on earth!

[Neville]

You sure know how to make an old fella feel good about the ink he spilt above .. bless You my very dear G Girl :)

[Patricia Wedel]

Wow.... so sacred and sensual... old clocks and Cathedrals...
stained glass Windows reflecting Love Devine... a Masterpiece...
tenderly, Pat

[Neville]

I am smiling from ear to there Pat and tenderly :)