A Formal Study of Her Knees

A Formal Study of Her Knees

 

In the sun like that

He couldn’t help but marvel

At the way

They both seemed to glow

Like early morning alabaster

And later

More like twin bronze patinas  

A smile then did form

As he took

His first sip of breakfast coffee

And watched her place

A tiny drop of sun cream

To the fore and aft and crown

Of those perfect knees of hers

And just to rub it in

He did then swear she had

The most amazing patella’s ever

 

Reviews

[lightsong]

Mr. Neville... Oh well, Mr. Passionate Neville, I noticed few times how You look and find those little precious "details" then turn them into some amazing poems. a poem about "knees" believe me we women love and appreciate when the man pay attention to those "little things". amazing.

[Neville]

that is very kind of you dear lightsong .. many thanks indeed ................................ Neville

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Neville, this was weaved with such beautiful passionate love! Love your imagery!

[Neville]

dear Kathy, thank you so much for your very kind review note .. your visits are always greatly appreciated .. Neville

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure!
P.s. you are becoming one of my favorite poets on this site!

[Neville]

cool ............. thank you again my friend :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You are welcome!

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville.... I adore your poem... My knees only became irresistible after a "Fall" in my golden years... and dislocated the structure in a pleasing way. Patella injuries have Been a blessing. Hope your days and nights are woven with Delights. tenderly, Pat

[Neville]

Bless you my friend .. you really are most kind .. regards to both your Patella's Pat & gently ...

Neville :)

[Ken Simm.]

Simply brilliant. A companion piece about what I consider to be the most sexy part of the body, the elbows? Depends on whose elbows you are talking about of course. And wh ose knees. But isn't that always the case?
The above remark comes also from years of life drawing both as model and as artist.

[Neville]

thank you very much Ken I appreciate no end that you are the very first to leave their mark on this particular page and after so long too .. Neville