Freefallen

Freefallen

 

Both gentle and brief

like some free falling leaf

He did love her, yet quietly ….

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Reading this reminds me of a high school crush. We would always have these quick flirtatious brief interactions. You could tell we both had a crush on each other but just unable to get past the stares and smiles. This poem reminds me of the way I felt for her. Thank you, Neville, for this wonderful poem.

[Neville]

how incredibly kind you bloomin are sir .. thanks Carlos :)

[emmajoy]

Beautiful and, more than poetry.

[Neville]

nah but I do thank you regardless emmajoy

[John the Baptist]

Has an unrequited sound to it. I wonder if she was ever aware of it.

[Neville]

I think she most probably is John.. thank you kindly:)

[mattavelli]

Hello, Neville! :)
This is a sweet write; short and sweet, so the sweetness oozes out and glistens like a crust of sugar.

[Neville]

Now that's what I call sweet my friend .. Thank you :)

[Shelley Warner]

My first romance at age 14 was like that. However, we got together after more than 50 years.

[Neville]

that is so cool my friend .. bless the pair of you .. and thanks for checking in :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Loving quietly isn’t always an easy

[Neville]

I fear we live in a throw away world .. but my thank you is for keeps :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I hate that so many things get thrown away