Empty Harbours

Empty Harbours

 

Empty harbours

Yawning

Hungry and waiting

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Empty harbours

Lying

Gaping and gasping

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Empty harbours

Gagging

Drowning and sighing

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Empty harbours

Raped

Aching and crying ..

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Empty harbours

Echo

Within their own walls

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Empty harbours

Screaming

Let this be a warning

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Empty Harbours

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[lightsong]

each tortured soul needs a harbour, a shoulder to lean on, a heart to empathy with them, an ear to listen... if their shouting didn't get to the hearts not yet? if this loud signs didn't reach the mind yet? then how more they can endure? an emotional, clever and sad one dear N* may your heart knows no emptiness but joy and love.

[Neville]

Good eve dear lightsong .. for some reason (again) I only just found your comment and by accident .. it seems there are still some glitches around .. Just want you to know that I am truly grateful for your continued visits and encouragement ...

Neville :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the honest flow of thoughts. Each adding to the to the tale of the empty harbours. Neville, maybe we are like the sea. Ever-changing and never still. Many stories hidden in the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Neville]

thanks for hopping on board and diving my friend .. much appreciated and always welcome so you are :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello my friend and you are welcome.

[L.E.Osborne]

Woah haunting! I really enjoyed this x

[Neville]

thank you kindly my friend ... muchly appreciated & truly tooly :)

[Crowley]

The only time a fog horn may not sound so lonely...this echos with desperate intensity luv...

[Neville]

thank you kindly stranger ..

[Meenakshi Dutta]

emptiness sucks, and the analogy here is so apt.
This somehow gives insight, about being so full of life and cheerful gives meaning to anything and everything.
Good write, Neville.
Best wishes,
Saga

[Neville]

.. it sure does my friend and I can't tell you just how grateful I am that you came along and took notice ......................... All God Things,

Neville :)

[Meenakshi Dutta]

.... Reciprocated dear friend.
Keep going.

[Neville]

bless ya :)