Dragons Tears

Dragons Tears

A Poem by Neville

Dragons Tears

 

Like a ruby in the dust


Bloody and bright


Filled with dragons tears

 

© 2020 Neville


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the title stopped me dead in my tracks Neville.. Dragon s tears was the first Koontz book I read.. gosh it's been years.. I found something equally stunning in your poem.. I had to think about it foe awhile.. I am far more familiar with clear quarts than rubies but if I am not mistaken the ruby as well as dragon tears are high level healing items.. powerful medicine.. "bloody and bright" wow.. I think about current events because it seems to be the life and times we live.. how desperately we need healing.. and I read your poem.. if I were going to seek a mystic path.. which I believe is as valid as any.. please Lord God Almighty.. give me bloody and bright.. like a ruby filled with Dragon's tears..

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Many thanks Olla for visiting 'Dragons Tears' and for your most encouraging thoughts and com.. read more
olla

4 Years Ago

believe me.. it was my pleasure..
Neville

4 Years Ago


.............. seriously smiling here my friend :)



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the title stopped me dead in my tracks Neville.. Dragon s tears was the first Koontz book I read.. gosh it's been years.. I found something equally stunning in your poem.. I had to think about it foe awhile.. I am far more familiar with clear quarts than rubies but if I am not mistaken the ruby as well as dragon tears are high level healing items.. powerful medicine.. "bloody and bright" wow.. I think about current events because it seems to be the life and times we live.. how desperately we need healing.. and I read your poem.. if I were going to seek a mystic path.. which I believe is as valid as any.. please Lord God Almighty.. give me bloody and bright.. like a ruby filled with Dragon's tears..

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Many thanks Olla for visiting 'Dragons Tears' and for your most encouraging thoughts and com.. read more
olla

4 Years Ago

believe me.. it was my pleasure..
Neville

4 Years Ago


.............. seriously smiling here my friend :)
Your vivid depiction paints the way we often carry around some burning aspect of life or memory or fear, something intensely buried & unshared (((DEEP))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


........... thank you Margie .. how bloomin kind you are my friend & true (PALLS) fondly, Ne.. read more
dearest Neville... this reflects my feelings about
someone who succeeded in improving our country...
and now suddenly... there is only a Ruby in the dust
bloody and bright filled with Dragon tears. truly, Pat

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


....... thank you for checking in on your way past dear Pat .. and gently
Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

Thank you for allowing me to comment on a very
poignant poem that has immense depth... very .. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


....... tis I that need to thank thee and dearly my lady ... and tis done .. but as a whispe.. read more
All sorts of wonders spring to mind. A ruby in the dust is still magnificent!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


not every thing is what it might at first appear ... but I do so like your words of encourag.. read more
Very few words expressing a fantasy!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Thank you my friend .. you can beat an egg, but ya can't beat a good old fantasy now can ya .. read more
I've been sitting here reading my Compendium of Monsters book I bought. I love fantasy and myths.
This is a really cool write.
I really enjoyed it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


you can beat an egg, but you just cant beat a decent fantasy, can ya .... bless you my frien.. read more
So visual and that ruby in the dust looked fabulous, but Dragons Tears is a special type of whiskey if I remember rightly, with a ruby red top to the bottle. May be well off the mark here, but it came to mind.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Never heard of that brand of whiskey Chris .. I do quite enjoy the occasional single malt th.. read more
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

I looked up spessarite. The stone is wondrous in its intense colour. Energising. Your title is good .. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


............ thank you Chris .. then it stays as is
Very vivid and plants a seed, of then what happened

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


......... tis up to you Cherrie .. I just plant seeds :)
nice new avatar by the way ... read more
Cherrie

4 Years Ago

Well thank you:)
Neville

4 Years Ago


... my pleasure and you are entirely welcome :)

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