Beyond Broke

Beyond Broke

A Poem by Neville
"

............. just a little bit of truth

"

Beyond Broke

 


She was


true enough


within the context


of believing herself to be


nothing but seriously honest


But other than that, she was quite


seriously deluded, needy and broken ...

 

 

© 2020 Neville


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Honesty is an admirable quality, while mental health illness is a curse that causes much torment to both the sufferer and their family. I know what broken is and it broken is beyond repair. That is difficult to contemplate. There isn't just a little bit of truth here, there is a whole lot of it. I think we all know people who will fit to some extent within these words. There is much of it around, underestimated for years, under resourced and likely with Covid to touch many more sadly. Brevity which speaks volumes. Good mane Neville. Bang on point.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


there are some very strange goings on here at the moment
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Well, I would like to think that I was on your mind, but It's more likely to do with either your key.. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


.............. and a gentleman never tells now, does he :)



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Reminds me of me lol.
Really good write.
Enjoyable read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Thank you ever so much Light and Ashes .. a most welcome visitation and true ...
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light and ashes

4 Years Ago

You are very welcome. :)
Honesty is an admirable quality, while mental health illness is a curse that causes much torment to both the sufferer and their family. I know what broken is and it broken is beyond repair. That is difficult to contemplate. There isn't just a little bit of truth here, there is a whole lot of it. I think we all know people who will fit to some extent within these words. There is much of it around, underestimated for years, under resourced and likely with Covid to touch many more sadly. Brevity which speaks volumes. Good mane Neville. Bang on point.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


there are some very strange goings on here at the moment
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Well, I would like to think that I was on your mind, but It's more likely to do with either your key.. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


.............. and a gentleman never tells now, does he :)

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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