Yellow Umbrella's

Yellow Umbrella's

 

Why don’t you take me

perhaps to a mountain or maybe a beach

 

Somewhere  

where there are yellow umbrella’s

 

And where the wind

blows windly and relentlessly wildly

 

And the glare from those yellow umbrella’s

makes me scrunch my eyes tightly

 

Like I’m frightened maybe

or why don’t you just take me

 

Right here in the hallway

Where the neighbours might see us

 

Behind yellow umbrella’s

Somehow, I just know you would like that …………

 

 

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville… I am laughing wildly… the Yellow Sun is bright these days and one needs the Shelter of the Breeze when you You squeeze under the shade of a Tree. My favorite Movie is an old movie with Gregory Peck.. entitled Yellow Sky. The Humor is Adorable and so is the young Lady who Stars in the Movie. It should be on U-tube for the asking. Thanks for getting my day off to a pleasant start. I slept in today. truly, Pat

[Neville]

am glad for so many things write this moment Pat .. firstly becuz you took the time and trouble to visit and comment .. and also becuz you just shared a little bit of your day with me ...
tenderly & frienderly yours ...

Neville :)

[olla]

Dang Neville.. release the purple balloons..

[Neville]

if I could, believe me, I would .. but then some one would probably come along and lock me up .. thanks for putting a smile on my face my friend ..
:)

[olla]

it's only fair.. you put one on mine first..

[Neville]

........................ :) ..

[John the Baptist]

I have heard of those who copulate urgently in elevators, their desire fanned by the possibility of the doors being opened unexpectedly on another floor. Since at my age it would probably take 100 floors to achieve the necessary organ hydraulics, this kind of thrill no longer appeals to me.

[Neville]

I suppose once bitten twice shy .. but thanks for taking a peek anyway

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and first we drank some fare with little yellow umbrellas in them...
then all inhibitions pour themselves out of us.
j.

[Neville]

I dont mind the occasional glass of red .. but never these days to excess ........ Ta j :)read more
I dont mind the occasional glass of red .. but never these days to excess ........ Ta j :)
N.

[Patricia Wedel]

You Guys act as if it is difficult after 30 years… you need to be Easy.

[Chris Shaw]

Yellow umbrellas eh? I guess when they are fully opened they resemble the sun. There was much here about umbrellas and the colour yellow, and far too little about the excitement in the hallway. I then started to wonder whether the front door was clear glass or what size the letterbox was :) So in all I can glean from this is a fetish for yellow umbrellas and a desire to be looked at in intimate settings. Whateva rings yer bell.

(the yellow is of significance, I've just been reading about yellow umbrellas and their meaning)

Chris

[Neville]

Sshh lets keep it a secret ... we dont want Google to crash now do we ... Cheers,
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Sshh lets keep it a secret ... we dont want Google to crash now do we ... Cheers,

Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Amazing what you can find out on Google if you look :)

[Samuel Dickens]

Weird, kinky and great! I wonder what Freud would've called a yellow umbrella fetish? Oh, well, I guess it doesn't matter--just as long as it facilitates some groovy sex.

[Neville]

...............That'll do nicely my friend .. I'll treat that as a compliment .. thank you sir .. its been a while since I have heard the term kinky but I love it .......................... cheers ..
:)

[barleygirl]

I was an exhibitionist in my younger, lusty past & I have some interesting notches on my belt to prove it. That's why I love that your poem starts out lofty, but degenerates into a mad dash for instant gratification. Nothing says "I crave you" like doing it right here & now, wherever! The umbrellas seem to be a fluttering distracting symbol of "propriety" perhaps? (((VEIL))) fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Back in the day, it was probably just as well we lived on opposite sides of the pond eh' Margie (POUTS) fondly, Neville

[Fay Slimm]

Whooeeee - -Hot set of questions in this write my friend ..... they sound like wild ideas yet love in a hallway could be quite special- - yellow umbrellas or not ................. x

[Neville]

thanks Fay ... I got a thing about blues and greens too ya know :)

[Fay Slimm]

Come on lets read all about them then - - soon......

[Neville]

.............. maybe .. it all depends on ...