Mr. Mediocre

Mr. Mediocre

A Poem by Neville

Mr. Mediocre 

Mr. Mediocre is a melancholy man
He is sad but not broken
He is down but not out
He wants to be someone’s friend

He’s just waiting for the shout …

I have been wronged so many times 
But this is something new
It just hurts the same that’s all, he said
With love from me to you ……………… x

© 2020 Neville


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This is just so sweet and it reminds me of the Mr Men books that I used to read to the kids. Mr Mediocre, I think is being a bit modest here. I think you may have a queue forming here, but as I got here first I hope you will work on the premise of first come first served. Also no need to shout. I can hear you when you whisper.The ending is endearing. You are going to make a lot of people smile on a miserable day :)

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

You know I've come back to this to read again. Mr Mediocre might think he needs friends but he needs.. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


second visits are always welcome and doubly appreciated .....
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Good morning dear Neville.



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You spank this profile of the common invisible person, the one who stands by, being hopeful & helpful no matter how many times he/she is dismissed for mediocrity. This feels like a spoof on hero worship, as if the only people some see are the ones in the spotlight while millions toil in mediocrity waiting for a few crumbs of acknowledgement (((STAR))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Hey pumpkin, how come you are so darn good at this game ... (SEEDS) fondly , Neville
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Hello my friend Neville. I believe new world is different. I talk to more people now than before. People, seem to need conversation. Coronaviras made people need to hear voices. The world can be lonely and we need someone to see us. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


I am glad we seem to think similarly Coyote my friend and much appreciate your visiting thes.. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
I love a melancholy man... he needs a hug.with kisses galore...
so I bake a Chocolate Cake topped with Cherries. He smiles and
the World is a better place to be... no longer a mediocre sort of guy...
and not a bit shy... tenderly, Pat

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Oooh err Ms. Weddle stick the keddle on would ya ... I love cherries n chocolate cake .. but.. read more
nothing is mediocre about Mr. Nev and if anyone says different I will give them a good choker! I will always be honored to call you friend good sir!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


the lump in me throat is for real Robert ... what a bloomin lovely thing to suggest say's I .. read more
Surely the poem doesn't refer to you! Can't do and must not. Even to creating those words prove otherwise. Perhaps the damp and drear gets to people at times. Best remember that 'mediocre' has a different meaning when when said by a man on the bottom rung of the ladder or the one at the top who thought he could cope with the height and dived head first into the air! Plaintiff finish.. ..

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Nah, not me emmajoy .. I'm far too busy winging it .. or should I say .. merely failing to f.. read more
This is just so sweet and it reminds me of the Mr Men books that I used to read to the kids. Mr Mediocre, I think is being a bit modest here. I think you may have a queue forming here, but as I got here first I hope you will work on the premise of first come first served. Also no need to shout. I can hear you when you whisper.The ending is endearing. You are going to make a lot of people smile on a miserable day :)

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

You know I've come back to this to read again. Mr Mediocre might think he needs friends but he needs.. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


second visits are always welcome and doubly appreciated .....
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Good morning dear Neville.

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Added on October 3, 2020
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