A contrary Mary, Neville. I guess life can be full of contradictions. And you are so gracious saying hers are beautiful. I have to say I hadn't noticed you being quiet, far from it. A pointed little piece which made me think of roses and their thorns all over again. Up with the early birds you are my friend.
these words just came to me from out of the blue ..they do that sometimes, dont they .. Than.. read more
these words just came to me from out of the blue ..they do that sometimes, dont they .. Thanking you Chris and bluely true :)
4 Years Ago
I have come back to this cryptic piece, of brevity, so very Neville. It has rained all day so I have.. read moreI have come back to this cryptic piece, of brevity, so very Neville. It has rained all day so I have had plenty of time to ponder on it and read it several times. Methinks the poet is feeling neglected, and the blue avatar with it's ripple that looks like an eye and a teardrop reflects those feelings. Now I have taken off my detective hat and I am back to being a poet :))
Chris
4 Years Ago
I am honoured that you should spend so much time thinking about these words Chris .. and I a.. read more
I am honoured that you should spend so much time thinking about these words Chris .. and I am a little bit tempted to spill the beans .. but it aint gonna happen .. ya never know, someone else might just visit and then where would I be eh' ... :)
What an exquisite way to look at it ! A beautiful piece of work ,sir.
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4 Years Ago
Bless you my dear Ankita ... many thanks indeed..
Neville :)
4 Years Ago
NEEDLESS..you are so sweet!
it kind of connects me to you in a strange way and so do your wor.. read moreNEEDLESS..you are so sweet!
it kind of connects me to you in a strange way and so do your words.
It is so often the contradictions that y=keep you fellows enticed, is it not? lol Just checking in on ya ole friend! I love that you have been so busy here! will hopefully be back soon to read some more!
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4 Years Ago
How extraordinarily & magnificently kind of you my Queen .. you know you are always welcome.. read more
How extraordinarily & magnificently kind of you my Queen .. you know you are always welcome dont ya :)
This is a gentle & yet poignant sentiment! I love how your poem sparks a bunch of possibilities in my mind as to many different precious moments this reminds me of. I posted maps this morning so you can check out my nearby wildfire situation. At the moment, everything comes back to fires, for me! Thanks for sharing your caress of thoughts (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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4 Years Ago
Hey Margie, thanks for checking in ... and for being gentle with me .. ya left me with more .. read more
Hey Margie, thanks for checking in ... and for being gentle with me .. ya left me with more than a warm glow ya know (HOTS) fondly, Neville ..
PS .. I not long ago checked out those wildfires .. and am thinking of you ..
See! This is the difference between you and me Nev. To you, she is a perfect contradiction (which makes me think of the Paloma Faith song, upside down for some reason) and me thinking it's a polite way of saying someone is nuttier than an explosion in a snickers factory. 😀
Yours wins 😀
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4 Years Ago
we were just born on different sides of the road Loz .. Yours made me laugh out loud .. mine.. read more
we were just born on different sides of the road Loz .. Yours made me laugh out loud .. mine made the centre page of the Chronicle & Echo 199*....
A contrary Mary, Neville. I guess life can be full of contradictions. And you are so gracious saying hers are beautiful. I have to say I hadn't noticed you being quiet, far from it. A pointed little piece which made me think of roses and their thorns all over again. Up with the early birds you are my friend.
these words just came to me from out of the blue ..they do that sometimes, dont they .. Than.. read more
these words just came to me from out of the blue ..they do that sometimes, dont they .. Thanking you Chris and bluely true :)
4 Years Ago
I have come back to this cryptic piece, of brevity, so very Neville. It has rained all day so I have.. read moreI have come back to this cryptic piece, of brevity, so very Neville. It has rained all day so I have had plenty of time to ponder on it and read it several times. Methinks the poet is feeling neglected, and the blue avatar with it's ripple that looks like an eye and a teardrop reflects those feelings. Now I have taken off my detective hat and I am back to being a poet :))
Chris
4 Years Ago
I am honoured that you should spend so much time thinking about these words Chris .. and I a.. read more
I am honoured that you should spend so much time thinking about these words Chris .. and I am a little bit tempted to spill the beans .. but it aint gonna happen .. ya never know, someone else might just visit and then where would I be eh' ... :)
Beautiful contradictions is a lovely pairing. I think the rest is a bit cryptic but perhaps that's by design and I don't have the right secret decoder ring to unscramble it. No less lovely though
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4 Years Ago
under the circumstances then, maybe we should both consider ourselves very lucky .. Cheers .. read more
under the circumstances then, maybe we should both consider ourselves very lucky .. Cheers Ana :)